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My fantasy poem please comment?
In the Phantoms night
From a life time of sleepy hollow,
coffined in the dungeon it lays
to hunt a night and sleep by days
confined at daylight in castle walls it stays.
The phantoms intension’s infused,
green like grass, blood to his taste
little left drizzles to waste
in nightfall drinking in haste.
Offspring they flex and fly,
black bat winged creatures at night
a swarm of a million in flight
silvered by moonlight.
Blood thirsty bats dangle harum-scarum,
red evil eyes they peep
like a tree of black bark they sleep
in wait of a golden apple to reap.
© Andrew Lockley 2008
Thanks http://poetrysamateur.wordpress.com/
heres what harum-scarum means http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&defl=en&q=define:harum-scarum&sa=X&oi=glossary_definition&ct=title
everyone comment my blog i have loads more poems 
the rhyming is OBVIOUS to spot, every 2,3,4 line rhyme....
it has a good flow, and you are very talented. keep it up.